Sometimes, when edits fail, the only answer is a rewrite. Something - All new . New thought; new lines - new thinking. Something - Rethought! Something Stronger, with characters more developed. A protagonist, maybe - with less character flaws, and more personality. And support - Yes. Support. Supporting characters, that’s it! Characters with more flair and more conflict to fill the story. This is serious business, after all. Readers want drama, Watchers want wonder! Something stronger - Striking! More Romantic! More Tragic! Something sweeter, Something bitter - Something Better, but with enough drama to drive ticket sales.
